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These are the dark hours
When cold starlight draws out the miles:
The mercy of the clean nights falling away to
Patchwork visions of you.

I will wake to a beat of peace
Then bear the full-frontal assault -
That mournful blow to the stomach.
A new detail to mourn.

The black tickling curls to wake me
The timbre of your argument
The clean curve, the pained tenderness -
The parting gift you promised to finish.

They circle the dawn and dance until sunset -
Then they are freed.
Goodnight darling.

Good morning my love.
©2009 ~bruceadams
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4th September 2009

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excellent work. Lots of impact and agressive language without turning into a rant. I really enjoyed it.

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